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My favorite singer is Marilyn Manson. He has an extraordinary and, perhaps, repulsive appearance. At the beginning of his career he wore his hair long and raven, and one of his eyes was brown and other one was blue, because he wore contact lenses. Thenadays he was tall and lean man and he had pail, hollow cheeks. For the next years he changed look very often. Her hair was short and long, fair and dark, he made different haircut and hairdo. He painted his lips and eyelids and his make-up was gaudy and flashy. And in some people’s opinion he looked such vulgar and obscene person.
Nowadays he is rather plump, not lean. He has full cheeks, double chin and paunch. His hair is jet-black, his eyes are brown and he doesn’t wear any contact lenses. He puts on red lipstick and his make-up is restrained in colour.

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[Elektrizza]

Her His hair was short and long