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At the beginning I have to meet this man in an airport. This is the first step on the path to make visitor feel like at home. There is no need to put on the best dress and shake the tablet with his name in front of his face. All these look forcedly and unnaturally. Much better to meet him in common atmosphere and slap his on the back just like old friend whom you haven’t seen for ages. Next I introduce him to my friends, we may be drink a little and sing song with guitar like there is no strangers here. He can sing to our company and become braver. Of course I will find out some information about his country and life. If he, for example, from huge mega polis I will take him to club. It would be great to go outing at the weekends. Camping is very good thing to unite the whole company, coz everybody must to do something and joint action makes behave like one team. I can show him some sights if he wants. And the most important and necessary is pillow fight being drunk! After that you become friends, no doubt! So if I have to receive foreign guest I just will be myself.
At the beginning I have to meet this man in an airport. This is the first step on the path to make visitor feel like at home. There is no need to put on the best dress and shake the tablet with his name in front of his face. All these look forcedly and unnaturally. Much better to meet him in common atmosphere and slap his on the back just like old friend whom you haven’t seen for ages. Next I introduce him to my friends, we may be drink a little and sing song with guitar like there is no strangers here. He can sing to our company and become braver. Of course I will find out some information about his country and life. If he, for example, from huge mega polis I will take him to club. It would be great to go outing at the weekends. Camping is very good thing to unite the whole company, coz everybody must to do something and joint action makes behave like one team. I can show him some sights if he wants. And the most important and necessary is pillow fight being drunk! After that you become friends, no doubt! So if I have to receive foreign guest I just will be myself.
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15.04.2009 в 20:42at
tablet
banner
look forcedly and unnaturally
forced and unnatural
Much better to meet
is to meet
slap his
him
like old friend whom
like an old friend, whom
Next I
Next, I
may be drink
may drink
sing song
a song
Of course I
,
If he, for example, from huge
For example, if he is from a huge
to club
to a club
coz
because
must to do something and
must do something, and
I just will be
I will just be
Как просили.
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15.04.2009 в 21:05ок, пасибо)
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15.04.2009 в 21:13.........
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15.04.2009 в 23:02There is no need to put on the best dress
Либо no need in doing something, либо don't need to do something.
in common atmosphere
Артикль а утерян.
just like old friend - то же замечание; необходим неопределённый артикль
to go outing(?) at
theweekends - Может быть, go out?and joint action makes behave like one team
После makes нужно какое-нибудь существительное или местоимение, make никогда не употребляется самостоятельно. Например, makes people bahave... А вообще я бы поставила вместо bеhave слово act.
to receive foreign guest - Вновь нужен неопределённый артикль.
Текст несколько нескладен, поскольку вы не определились, в каком времени вы ведёте повествование. Скорее всего, от вас требовалось предположить, что бы вы делали, если бы к Вам приехал иностранец. В таком случае Вам лучше переделать текст так, чтобы в нём содержались конструкции типа If ..., I would. Т.е. в данной ситуации вам нужно не will, не future simple, а именно would, could и т.д
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16.04.2009 в 01:47man in an airport man in the airport? вы же знаете в каком именно аэропорту встречаете?
to go outing(?) at the weekends обычно говорят to go out on the weekends
мегаполис пишется слитно
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16.04.2009 в 07:44нет, тут всмысле если он сам споет) а за остальное спасибо.
Le_Taon
да, согласна, заменю на would)
*white bear*
нет, в каком аэропорту не знаю. это обобщенно, что к каком-то встретить надо сначала)
а outing - такое слово точно есть) у нас в активном словаре по Бонку даже пример есть "To go outing" -выезжадть на природу
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16.04.2009 в 12:12а outing - такое слово точно есть) у нас в активном словаре по Бонку даже пример есть "To go outing" -выезжадть на природу
Спасибо, буду знать =)