[MaLaJ@]

Могли бы проверить и исправить ошибки в двух небольших текстах?

In one perfect day I and my friends decided to go to the skating rink. We were having a good time but suddenly my friend July fell down. We saw that the ice near July became red. It was blood!
We helped her to get up. On her face was blood from an open wound which flew on a forehead. July was badly shocked and in great pain. We delivered her to hospital. When we arrived at the casualty department, she was admitted. The nurse washed out the wound. When wound is as clean the nurse injected July an anaesthetising and suture wound. In the end nurse cover wound with a sterile adhesive tape. The doctors who examined July said that it was necessary go to x-ray department. Then they came back the doctor said, that July had sustained a brain concussion, but it wasn’t necessary stay in a hospital.
The doctor prescribes medicine which was necessary to take. After that we all went home.




There are a lot of diseases at which patients stay in hospital for a long time. For such patients the ward is the second home during they stay in a hospital. When you long time in hospital to you needful not only carries of nurse, but also and comfortable place were you living. Modern ward in hospital include all accommodation.
In ward must be fairly space to prevent cross-infection and to allow all bedside procedures to be carried out in comfort. The ward must be single, because then in a ward a lot of patience were tumultuous crowd and patience can’t take one’s ease. In ward also must be noise suppression. The plastic equipment and the provision of central dish-washing and sterilizing departments have been a great help in eliminating noise. In all wards must be hand basins and lavatories and the patients in wheelchairs should convenient to reach them. In E.N.T (ear, nose and throat) wards must be device that doing air fresh and light. Also in all wards must be red button (special gadget to call a nurse).
In the end all wards must be paint over in bright colors, it has been used to create a cheerful atmosphere in the ward.

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[*white bear*]

There are a lot of diseases at which patients stay in hospital for a long time. For such patients[,] the ward is the second home during they stay in a hospital. When you [are staying] long time in hospital to you needful not only carries of nurse, but also and comfortable place were you living. [it is really important not only have the professinal medical care but also a comfortable place to stay at/ live at.] Modern ward in hospital [must include / includes ] all accommodation.
In ward must be fairly enough space to prevent cross-infection and to allow all bedside procedures to be carried out in comfort. The ward must be single, because then in a ward a lot of patience were tumultuous crowd and patience can’t take one’s ease. In ward also must be noise suppression. The plastic equipment and the provision of central dish-washing and sterilizing departments have been [ would be ] a great help in eliminating noise. In all wards must be hand basins and lavatories and the patients in wheelchairs should convenient [be able ] to reach them. In E.N.T (ear, nose and throat) wards must be [have a ]device that doing air fresh and light. Also in all wards must be red button - a special gadget to call a nurse.
In the end all wards must be paint over in bright colors, it has been used [in order] to create a cheerful atmosphere in the ward.

помоему так должно быть... по крайней мере я так думаю

[MaLaJ@]

большое спасибо!!

[*white bear*]

пожалуйста =) если еще помочь надо будет спрашивайте =)