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читать дальшеThere were three sisters. One of them got merry really successful and became Lady Bertram, who lived in a wealthy estate, which was called Mansfield Park. Her sister married her husband’s friend Mr. Norris, who had not any private fortune, but Sir Thomas Bertram gave him an income in the living of Mansfield Park. The third sister married to disoblige her family and became a wife of a sailor without education and fortune. Mrs. Price and her sisters quarreled and didn’t talk during eleven years. But one day Mrs. Norris said that their sister was waiting for a ninth child, her husband was a drunker and she was very poor. Lady Bertram was the richest among the sisters and Mrs. Norris suggested taking one of sister’s children and bringing him or her up. They chose a girl Fanny of ten years old and bring her to Mansfield Park. A girl was small, with a pale complexion, very timid and shy, but she was really nice. In comparison with Fanny her cousins were fine, the sons of sixteen and seventeen were very well-looking and the daughters of twelve and thirteen were handsome and all of them had a great education and manners for their age. A girl shamed of her appearance and missed her family, she was afraid of everybody. After a few months she felt more comfortable, because first of all her cousin Edmund became her friend and she began to know more things and people at Mansfield Park.
Lady Bertram didn’t care of her children, only Mrs. Norris and a governess. The eldest son grew carefree and extravagant; the others gave only good emotions, parents were proud of them. Sir Thomas continued to help Mrs. Price with other children too. One time Fanny even was happy to see her elder brother William who visited her before he became a sailor.
The governess taught her French and read the History for her. Edmund still was the only friend for her. He advised her books which it was better to read and developed her taste and mind. They discussed all the books she had read.
The first important event in the family was the death of Mr. Norris. Sir Thomas Bertram hoped that Mrs. Norris would take their niece now, because as he believed she dreamed about it from the beginning, but the illness of Mr. Norris disturbed her. There was no hindrance now, but he had a mistake his sister in law didn’t plan to share her house with a niece and waste own money for her.
The living was for Edmund, but his brother Tom was so extravagant that they were forced to give the living to a new clergyman. The Grants arrived at the parsonage. They were quite nice and sociable, but not without some disadvantages.
After a year Mr. Bertram and his eldest son had to leave England for business, because they had some money problems. Edmund decide everything at Mansfield Park at that period.
The winter came and passed. The Miss Bertrams began to go into public, Fanny didn’t share festivals of the season, and she was Lady Bertram’s companion at home. Mrs. Norris tried to organize her niece’s life. During the season she found a fiancé for Maria Bertram who was elder. Mr. Rushworth was stricken with Maria’s beauty and believed that he fell in love with her. Actually he was dull, but he had common sense and had nothing disagreeable. Maria Bertram was twenty one years old and she was happy to be engaged with him.
In the middle of June when Fanny had just reached her eighteen year brother and sister of Mrs. Grant a Mr. and Miss Crawford came. They stayed there as guests of their sister for a long time. Young people made friends rather quickly. Mrs. Grant and Mrs. Norris planed to engage Mr. Crawford and Julia Bertram. And also they supposed to have such a math as Tom Bertram and Miss Crawford.
During innumerous walks, trips and parties we could see that the pairs could be changed, nothing was as definite as old ladies thought. Mr. Crawford had nice talks with the eldest Miss Bertrams too regardless of her engagement. Miss Crawford began to spend a lot of time with Edmund when Tom left England for business again.
First of all young people visited Sezerton, Mr. Rushworth’s estate on purpose to find faults which it was necessary to improve later. In Sozerton we saw episodes where Edmund and Miss Crawford left Fanny for an hour and we walking alone and also when Maria with help of Mr. Crawford crossed locked gate in the garden instead of waiting of waiting for Mr. Rushworth who would bring a key.
The Bertram’s were waiting for their father, but a few months before they organized a ball at Mansfield, because Tom’s friend Mr. John Yates came and they could have five pairs.
Lady Bertram didn’t care of her children, only Mrs. Norris and a governess. The eldest son grew carefree and extravagant; the others gave only good emotions, parents were proud of them. Sir Thomas continued to help Mrs. Price with other children too. One time Fanny even was happy to see her elder brother William who visited her before he became a sailor.
The governess taught her French and read the History for her. Edmund still was the only friend for her. He advised her books which it was better to read and developed her taste and mind. They discussed all the books she had read.
The first important event in the family was the death of Mr. Norris. Sir Thomas Bertram hoped that Mrs. Norris would take their niece now, because as he believed she dreamed about it from the beginning, but the illness of Mr. Norris disturbed her. There was no hindrance now, but he had a mistake his sister in law didn’t plan to share her house with a niece and waste own money for her.
The living was for Edmund, but his brother Tom was so extravagant that they were forced to give the living to a new clergyman. The Grants arrived at the parsonage. They were quite nice and sociable, but not without some disadvantages.
After a year Mr. Bertram and his eldest son had to leave England for business, because they had some money problems. Edmund decide everything at Mansfield Park at that period.
The winter came and passed. The Miss Bertrams began to go into public, Fanny didn’t share festivals of the season, and she was Lady Bertram’s companion at home. Mrs. Norris tried to organize her niece’s life. During the season she found a fiancé for Maria Bertram who was elder. Mr. Rushworth was stricken with Maria’s beauty and believed that he fell in love with her. Actually he was dull, but he had common sense and had nothing disagreeable. Maria Bertram was twenty one years old and she was happy to be engaged with him.
In the middle of June when Fanny had just reached her eighteen year brother and sister of Mrs. Grant a Mr. and Miss Crawford came. They stayed there as guests of their sister for a long time. Young people made friends rather quickly. Mrs. Grant and Mrs. Norris planed to engage Mr. Crawford and Julia Bertram. And also they supposed to have such a math as Tom Bertram and Miss Crawford.
During innumerous walks, trips and parties we could see that the pairs could be changed, nothing was as definite as old ladies thought. Mr. Crawford had nice talks with the eldest Miss Bertrams too regardless of her engagement. Miss Crawford began to spend a lot of time with Edmund when Tom left England for business again.
First of all young people visited Sezerton, Mr. Rushworth’s estate on purpose to find faults which it was necessary to improve later. In Sozerton we saw episodes where Edmund and Miss Crawford left Fanny for an hour and we walking alone and also when Maria with help of Mr. Crawford crossed locked gate in the garden instead of waiting of waiting for Mr. Rushworth who would bring a key.
The Bertram’s were waiting for their father, but a few months before they organized a ball at Mansfield, because Tom’s friend Mr. John Yates came and they could have five pairs.
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08.11.2008 в 21:40who had not any private fortune - лучше didn't have
an income in the living of Mansfield Park - смысл фразы от меня ускользнул, но ещё больше смущает артикль перед income.during eleven years - может лучше in или for?
waiting for a ninth child - предлагаю was about to mother/to give birth to
was a drunker - гораздо лучше a boozer
a girl Fanny of ten years old - лучше aged ten
began to know = came to know
He advised her books which it was better to read = advised her on the read/ which books to read
but he had a mistake - made пропустили
The living was for Edmund - что имеется в виду????
but not without some disadvantages - не может быть такой структуры. я б сказал - but they did have some flaws
After a year - a year after/ in a year
money problems - financial problems
Edmund decide everything at Mansfield Park at that period - was in charge of/took controle of
and had nothing disagreeable - there was nothing wrong with him
PlanNed
to find faults which it was necessary to improve later - to find setbacks to fix
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08.11.2008 в 21:44quarreled and
didn’t talkduring eleven years. - have quarreled and haven't been talking for eleven years/the sons of sixteen and seventeen - + years old
well-looking - good-lookingdaughters of twelve and thirteen were
handsomdaughters of twelve and thirteen were handsome - were beautiful (handsome только для мужчин)A girl shamed of her appearance - was ashamed of
she began
to knowmore things - began to learn more about things ...didn’t care of her children - didn't take care of
only Mrs. Norris and a governess - ... and a governess did
eldest son grew carefree and extravagant - grew as/into a carefree and extravagant person
who visited her before he became a sailor - who had visited ...
read
theHistory for her - уберите thestill was the only friend
for her. - was still the only friend of herswhich
it wasbetter to read - which were better to readhe
hada mistake his sister in lawdidn’t planto share her housewith a niece and wasteown money for her. -made a mistake: his sister in law hasn't planned to share her house and spend her own money for the niece.but
not withoutsome disadvantages. - but had some disadvantages (а то получается два отрицания)Aftera year - in a yearEdmund
decideeverything - Edmund managed everythingTheMiss Bertrams - убрать the; Bertram (как бут множественное число к miss мну заклинило. вроде misses)Mr. Rushworth was
strickenwith Maria’s beauty - was amased (а то stricken обычно болеезнью)))brother and sister of Mrs. Grant
aMr. and Miss Crawford came. - убрать aAnd also they supposed to have such a math as Tom Bertram and Miss Crawford. - they also supposed; math - это математика, я думаю вы знаете. Какое именно слово вы хотели употребить?
innumer
ous- innumerablewhich
itwas necessary toimprovelater - which were necessary to eliminateand we walking alone - were walking.. хм, alone эт вообще-то в одиночестве. Я понимаю вас, но это не совсем корректно.
of waiting
of waitingfor Mr. Rushworth who would bring a key. - of waiting 1 раз)) и Mr.Rushworth who was to bring the key.The Bertram’s were waiting for their father, - The Bertrams
a few months before they organized a ball at Mansfield - they had organized
Гхм.. Могла увидеть не все.
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08.11.2008 в 21:56сейчас все почитаю.
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08.11.2008 в 22:03ну да,мой вариант это английский Джейн Остин.просто эту часть я прям из книги взяла.
спасибо,подумаю.
an income in the living of Mansfield Park- назначил ему (какой-то) some так сказать доход в приходе(церковном) Менсфилд парка
during eleven years - может лучше in или for?- да.с этим согласна,очень уж я люблю during,тут оно плохо.спасибо.
The living was for Edmund - приход был для Эдмунда.
вообщем спасибо
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08.11.2008 в 22:11The Miss Bertrams - убрать the; Bertram (как бут множественное число к miss мну заклинило. вроде misses) это специфика перессказа этой книги.тоже самое.век.я еще подумаю.просто мне в сдаче надо ещё и стиллистику как-то передать.спасибо
And also they supposed to have such a math as Tom Bertram and Miss Crawford. - they also supposed; math - это математика, я думаю вы знаете. Какое именно слово вы хотели употребить?
спасибо.
иногда полезно дать кому-то почитать.
такие глупые ошибки.
а сама себя проверять не умею.
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08.11.2008 в 22:13а почему тут будет perfect,по вашему мнению?и именно simple?
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