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I cant stand ammoing adverts on tv, because it is stops a films or broadcasts. But expecialy annoing adverts about four women, who sing the stuped song about каблучки макияж. And this song make you want to sing along with the women. It is the most horrible.
But sometimes adverts are so good. I like adverts by company MTS about men, who sings the song in the shower or advert about men, who to go aroud the world and ( нужно написать: отрывается). Its realy funny.
Some more i like adverts of perfume, because it is always very beautiful and accompanied a good soundtrack.

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[AlterEgo66613]

I can't stand annoying adverts on TV, because it is stops (со множественным числом не может быть артикля "a") films or broadcasts. But especially annoying adverts about four women, who sing the stupid song about heels and make-up. And this song make you want to sing along with the women. It is the most horrible.
But sometimes adverts are so good. I like adverts by company MTS about men, who sings the song in the shower or advert about men, who to go around the world and ( нужно написать: отрывается: have a good time, make merry, play the field). It's really funny.
Some more I like adverts of perfume, because it is always very beautiful and accompanied a good soundtrack.

*Это то, что я заметила*

[Demetra2k]

It IS stops??
It stops - без is
Men who sing - без окончания s
Men who go - без частицы to
By MTS company - я бы поменяла местами

I cant stand ammoing adverts on tv, because it is stops a films or broadcasts. But expecialy annoing adverts about four women, who sing the stuped song about каблучки макияж. And this song make you want to sing along with the women. It is the most horrible.
But sometimes adverts are so good (я бы тут написала good enough, но и так не ошибка). I like adverts by company MTS about men, who sings the song in the shower or advert about men, who to go (goes и без to) aroud the world and ( нужно написать: отрывается) "отрывается" ну например has a fun. Its realy funny.
Some more i like adverts of perfume, because it is always very beautiful and accompanied by a good soundtrack.

[Demetra2k]

Men who goes?? Men - их как бы много. Откуда s?

да, во множественном, меня смутило "отрывается" в единственном)) тогда have a fun ещё, а не has

[Гость]

спасибо огромное!! вы лучшие :з