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[Кружит_вальс]

I am waiting for you . And you know what ? I have never been so sensitive in my waiting . Every night i see dreams. Sweet,colorfull. beatifull dreams , where the main heroes are you and me . Sometimes we are dancing tango , another time we sit down on the grass and tell to each other different stories about our childhood . We are laughing . I look in your eyes and see meaning of my life . Sometimes i feel lonely ,especially now in my waiting for you ... i don 't know what will be in the future . Will i fall in love or we will be just friends . I dont want to think about it . It is not interesting . It is not attractive .
I just believe that we will have amazing weekend together in July .I am tired of school studing . I tired of girls , who envy me . I tired of gossips and everything in this way . I don t want to see those people who hurt me. And truly i want to escape from this city and from this country . I want to start new life . You are my hope , my fresh air , which can help to breath so deep .... You are the start , which can bring me to the finish ...

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[seltener Vogel]

Sometimes we are dancinge tango , another time we sit down on the grass and tell to each other different stories about our childhood .симпл если это происходит обычно, а не ты представляешь этот сон как перед твоими глазами. в любом случае везде в описании одной сцены должно быть одно время. После tell "to" не ставится
We are laughing .
I look into your eyes and see the meaning of my life .
Will i fall in love or we will be just friends?
I just believe that we will have an amazing weekend together in July .
I am tired of school studing . лучше либо school, либо studying, либо studying at school если так хочется уточнить, где
I want to start a new life .
вообще.. о_о хорошо написано. и я думаю, если ты общаешься с носителем, то он не заметит все эти грамматические ошибки. Высказывания ясные, красивые, я бы хотел получить такое письмо о_о Лексика в общем правильно используется. Так что всё в порядке)

[Кружит_вальс]

Спассииббоооо большое :*

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beautiful
colourful
одно "l"
breathe