читать дальшеOnce upon a time, at the beginning of the summer, Mr. Badger paid an official call on the Rat and the Mole. Animals were surprised as he had never paid official calls at all; actually it was a serious undertaking to catch him anywhere even in his house in the middle of the wood. It turned out that he came to accomplish the work of rescue of Mr. Toad; Mr. Badger learned from a trustworthy source that Mr. Toad was going to get a new powerful car at that moment and Badger was sure that his friend would disregard all their warnings which had been given before. He was right that Toad was going to try the new car, but friends stopped him. Mr. Badger had a long conversation with him the purpose of which was to explain Toad his misguided conduct. Mr. Toad became an affectionate fellow at first and recognized he had behaved in a wrong way, but shortly after that he turned into a backsliding animal and started enjoying his past adventures. Then Mr. Badger became angry and animals decided to live at Toad’s place till he would yield to their persuasion. Ratty and Molly locked Mr. Toad in his bedroom in spite of shouting abuse at them and they didn’t leave him unguarded. But one day The Mole and the Badger went to walk and the Rat stayed with the Toad alone. Mr. Toad was cunning As Mr. Toad was cunning, he pretended to be ill and crestfallen and asked to call a doctor. The Rat The rat was really gullible, and therefore believed, leaving him alone for some time. It was enough for Mr. Toad to run away from the house.
Once upon a time, at the beginning of the summer, Mr. Badger commas
because better: as
didn’t pay had never paid
at all; actually semicolon
serious undertaking rather hard job
anywhere, even comma
work of rescue of Mr. Toad work of rescuing Mr. Toad
learnt from trustworthy learned(they hardly ever use 'learnt'), the article
would get was going to get
at the moment, at that moment, (comma)
И вообще, это предложение слишком длинное для английского. И немного запутанное. Разбейте.
He was right Toad better to put 'that'
try a new car the
but friends stopped it the friends; stop what?
Mr. Badger had a long conversation with him in order to explain Toad his misguided conduct. replace 'him'; "in order to" can't be used here. Use "the purpose of which was to ..."
He became Who is that "he"?
and recognized his behavior as a wrong one OMG. and realized he had behaved in a wrong way
but after that he turned to a backsliding animal very soon but shortly after that he turned into a backsliding animal
enjoyed started enjoying
Mr. Badger became angry, and animals decided to live at Toad’s place till he would comma; animals decided to move to ... until he yields ... (What that "yield to their persuasion" was supposed to mean?)
in spite of shouting abuse at them, of his (shouting at them/abusing them/swearing at them); comma
went to walk and the Rat stayed comma
Mr. Toad was cunning and pretended As Mr. Toad was cunning, he pretended
The Rat was innocent, he believed and left him for some time The rat was really gullible, and therefore believed, leaving him alone for some time
В общем: много проблем с запятыми и с длиной предложений. Английский - не русский, не нужно делать кальку. Затем - неразбериха со временами и с тем, о ком, собственно, речь.
serious undertaking rather hard job work of rescue of Mr. Toad work of rescuing Mr. Toadyield to their persuasion - поддаться уговорам in spite of shouting abuse at them, of his (shouting at them/abusing them/swearing at them)
нужно использовать именно те выражения,которые были использованы у меня.Они из самого романа.И мне нужно было использовать именно их. А так большое спасибо! На пунктуацию,если честно вообще внимания не обращала,так как готовила текст для устного выступления.
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03.05.2009 в 01:00commas
because
better: as
didn’t pay
had never paid
at all; actually
semicolon
serious undertaking
rather hard job
anywhere, even
comma
work of rescue of Mr. Toad
work of rescuing Mr. Toad
learnt from trustworthy
learned(they hardly ever use 'learnt'), the article
would get
was going to get
at the moment,
at that moment, (comma)
И вообще, это предложение слишком длинное для английского. И немного запутанное. Разбейте.
He was right Toad
better to put 'that'
try a new car
the
but friends stopped it
the friends; stop what?
Mr. Badger had a long conversation with him in order to explain Toad his misguided conduct.
replace 'him'; "in order to" can't be used here. Use "the purpose of which was to ..."
He became
Who is that "he"?
and recognized his behavior as a wrong one
OMG. and realized he had behaved in a wrong way
but after that he turned to a backsliding animal very soon
but shortly after that he turned into a backsliding animal
enjoyed
started enjoying
Mr. Badger became angry, and animals decided to live at Toad’s place till he would
comma; animals decided to move to ... until he yields ... (What that "yield to their persuasion" was supposed to mean?)
in spite of shouting abuse at them,
of his (shouting at them/abusing them/swearing at them); comma
went to walk and the Rat stayed
comma
Mr. Toad was cunning and pretended
As Mr. Toad was cunning, he pretended
The Rat was innocent, he believed and left him for some time
The rat was really gullible, and therefore believed, leaving him alone for some time
В общем: много проблем с запятыми и с длиной предложений. Английский - не русский, не нужно делать кальку.
Затем - неразбериха со временами и с тем, о ком, собственно, речь.
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03.05.2009 в 17:06-
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03.05.2009 в 17:35rather hard job
work of rescue of Mr. Toad
work of rescuing Mr. Toadyield to their persuasion - поддаться уговорам
in spite of shouting abuse at them,
of his (shouting at them/abusing them/swearing at them)
нужно использовать именно те выражения,которые были использованы у меня.Они из самого романа.И мне нужно было использовать именно их.
А так большое спасибо!
На пунктуацию,если честно вообще внимания не обращала,так как готовила текст для устного выступления.
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03.05.2009 в 17:43Не за что
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03.05.2009 в 17:45это уже к Mr.Grahame
книга то не новая,вот и резали.я думаю.