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[Pineta]

Maisie was irritable at Vitre-sur-Marne, because of the heat during the weeks, dificulties with Kami and her paintings, especially with the Melancolia, but the most terrible fact was that Dick, who had been like her property, didn’t answer her letters. She was just contemplating the world aroud and was thinking about him all the time.

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was irritable

was irritated

who had been like her property

was like her property

didn’t answer her letters

я бы написала haven't answered

Вот, все вроде.

[Pineta]

Тиамиса-но-Нее-сама,спасибо.приму к сведению.