читать дальшеIn this chapter we can read about Dick and Maisie relations and also about new Dick’s and Torp’s advantures. Dick continued to loaf and to wait for Sundays. One day he decided that he made some headway in his relations with Maisie, but on the contrary she planned to go to France to go off chassing butterflies a month sooner. Dick was angry, but he tried to command his temper, although Maisie didn’t pay attention to his advaise, tried to embody Melancolia which she could not draw. The day came and he farewelled Maisie and she even kissed him.When Dick returened home; he found a girl, Torp explained that she was dropping with starvation ahe was frail,that’s why Torp let her in the flat.Dick became to use this girl like a modal for his Melancolia.After some time Bessy( this girl) dared to ask Torp to live in his flat, but when Dick knew he advaised to leave the city and to travel and Torp followed the advaice
In this chapter we can read about Dick and Maisie's relations and also about their new advantures. Dick kept having loaf and waiting for Sundays. One day he decided to make some headway in his relations with Maisie, but she on the contrary planned to go off to France to chase butterflies a month sooner. Dick was angry but he tried to control his temper, although (BECAUSE???) Maisie didn’t pay attention to his advice, she tried to embody Melancolia which she could not draw. The day came and he bid his farewell to Maisie and she even kissed him.When Dick returened home he found a girl there, Torp explained that she was starving and frail, that’s why he let her into the flat.Dick thought she would be a good model for his Melancolia. After some time Bessy (that's the girl's name) dared to ask Torp to live in his flat, but when Dick knew it he adviced Torp to leave the city and to travel and he followed the advice.
Черт, мне было бы проще перевести с русскоро, чем догадываться о смысле. Исправила как смогла.
Footstep,да,я вчера немного в ударе была,т.к. болею...) за исправления спасибо.)в плоане конкретно грамматики и добавление некоторых слов.да) но те выражения,которые вы изменили или убрали,то именно они должны быть использованы,т.к. это саммари главы с определенными выражениями. большое спасибо! просто у самой сейчас высокая температура и понимала,что реально много ошибок в этом маленьком тексте.
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18.04.2008 в 08:41Dick kept having loaf and waiting for Sundays. One day he decided to make some headway in his relations with Maisie, but she on the contrary planned to go off to France to chase butterflies a month sooner. Dick was angry but he tried to control his temper, although (BECAUSE???) Maisie didn’t pay attention to his advice, she tried to embody Melancolia which she could not draw. The day came and he bid his farewell to Maisie and she even kissed him.When Dick returened home he found a girl there, Torp explained that she was starving and frail, that’s why he let her into the flat.Dick thought she would be a good model for his Melancolia. After some time Bessy (that's the girl's name) dared to ask Torp to live in his flat, but when Dick knew it he adviced Torp to leave the city and to travel and he followed the advice.
Черт, мне было бы проще перевести с русскоро, чем догадываться о смысле. Исправила как смогла.
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18.04.2008 в 09:04за исправления спасибо.)в плоане конкретно грамматики и добавление некоторых слов.да)
но те выражения,которые вы изменили или убрали,то именно они должны быть использованы,т.к. это саммари главы с определенными выражениями.
большое спасибо!
просто у самой сейчас высокая температура и понимала,что реально много ошибок в этом маленьком тексте.