Help me.

[Ancalina]

Здравствуйте.
Я всю жизнь учила немецкий язык, а в институте после семестра английского приходится сдавать экзамен. Можете проверить правильность примитивных текстов, которые я составила.
Заранее огромное спасибо.

My hobby

1. My hobby is reading. 2. When I was still a baby, my mother read for me. 3. She read for me tale. 4. I liked it. 5. I learnt read myself, when I went to kindergarten. 6. When I began study in school, I read already quickly. 7. I read very much now. 8. My best friend Anna like read book too. We often talk about books. 9. My favourite writer is D.R.R. Tolkien. 10. He wrote a lot of books. 11. My favourite books is “Lord of the rings” and “Silmarillion”. 12. I read very often. 13. I like fantasy, fantastic, tale, poem, classic and books about life. 14. Now I read book “Angel’s tract”. 15. This book is very interesting. 16. I have electric book, it is very comfortable. 17. Reading is very good. 18. Reading gives much pleasure 19. Books at home are a wonderful source of knowledge and pleasure. 20. My hobby is very interesting and useful.

My House.

1. My family lives in big and comfortable house. 2. There are six rooms in the house. 3. There are two bedrooms, living-room, kitchen, bath-room and hall in it. 4. My room is on the second floor. 5. It is clear and cosy. 6. There is one window in my room. 7. There is a table in the corner of the room. 8. On the right there is a sofa and chest of drawers. 9. There are some shelves with books in the room. 10. There is a carpet in the middle of my room. 11 I like my room very much. 12. My room is a nice place for both rest and work. 13. Our kitchen is not very large but it is light. 14. In evenings we like to have tea and have rest in it. 15. The largest room in my house is the living-room. 16. There is a sofa, two armchairs, a coffee table, a TV in it. 17. There is big verandah and two store-rooms in my house. 18. My house is in the garden. 19. Our garden is very beautiful. 20. We like our house.

My family.

1. My name is Svetlana. 2. My surname is Kolova. 3. I am nineteen years old. 4. My family is not large. 5. I have got mother, father, sister and grandmother. 6. My mother’s name is Elena. 7. She is librarian. She likes her profession. 8. Mother likes flowers and cookery. 9. My father’s name is Alexander. 10. He is driver. 11. My sister’s name is Ekaterina. 12. She is schoolgirl. 13. She likes read books and draw. 14. My grandmother is a pensioner. 15. Earlier she worked doctor. 16. My family lives in big and comfortable house. 17. We have dog, two cats. 18. Pets are nice and playful. 19. Our family is friendly. 20. We love each other.

My favourite actor.

1. Viggo Peter Mortensen is an American actor, poet, musician, photographer and painter. He is very handsome man. 2. He was born in New York City in 1958 year. 3. His mother, Grace, was American. 4. His father, Viggo Peter Mortensen, was Danish. 5. The family moved to Venezuela, then Denmark, and eventually lived in Argentina. 6. With his mother he returned to New York, when Viggo was eleven year. 7. Viggo began study in Watertown High School and became a very good student and athlete. 8. He graduated in 1976 and went on to St. Lawrence University in Canton, New York. 9. He made his film debut in 1985 year. 10. He married in 1987. 11. Viggo is very talented actor. 12. He played very many parts. 13. The Indian Runner, Carlito's Way, Crimson Tide, The Portrait of a Lady, G.I. Jane and A Walk on the Moon are famous films, where Viggo played the leading part. 14. But his most famous film is “Lord of the rings”. 15. He played Aragorn in this film. 16. “Lord of the rings” is very interesting film. 17. I watch it very often. 18. I like Viggo, because he is talented!

My last week-end

1. On Saturday I passed an examination. (Mathematical statistics) 2. I received “five”. 3. I and my sister went to grandmother. 4. We drank coffee and watched TV. 5. At evening we watched cartoon “Lilo and Stitch”. 6. Cartoon was very interesting and nice. 7. I watched football match at night. 8. Spain conquered France. Match was very interesting and beautiful. 9. Match finished late and I went to bed. 10. I slept very much. 11. On Sunday I went on lake with my family. 12. I swam and played volley-boll. 13. I read book about witch and wizard. 14. Book was fascinating. 15. At evening I with my sister wrote text for examination. 16. Then I learnt text. 17. I cooked cake. 18. Cake was tasty. 19. At night I watched football match again. 20. This week-end was very good.

Comments

[Alensya]

1. My hobby is reading. 2. My mother read for me when I was a child. 3. She read tales for me. 4. I liked it. 5. I was learning to read myself in kindergarten. 6. When I began study in school, I was able to read quickly. 7. I read a lot now. 8. My best friend Anna likes reading too. We often talk about books. 9. My favourite writer is D.R.R. Tolkien. 10. He wrote a lot of books. 11. My favourite books are“Lord of the rings” and “Silmarillion”. 12. I read very often. 13. I like fantasy, science fiction, tales, poems, classic literature and books about reality. 14. Now I read book “Angel’s tract”. 15. This book is very interesting. 16. I have electric book, it is very handy . 17. Reading is very useful. 18. Reading gives much pleasure 19. Books at home are the wonderful sources of knowledge and pleasure. 20. My hobby is very interesting and useful.

инфа не 100%, возможно что-то пропустила-будет время еще другие посмотрю

[Emma-tyan]

1. My hobby is reading. 2. When I was still a baby, my mother used to read for me. 3. She used to read tales for me . 4. I liked it. 5. I learnt read myself, when I went to kindergarten. (тут непонятно как это звучит на русском?)6. When I began studying at school, I was reading read quickly already . 7. I read a lot now. 8. My best friend Anna likes reading books too. We often talk about books. 9. My favourite writer is J.R.R. Tolkien. 10. He wrote a lot of books. 11. My favourite books are “Lord of the rings” and “Silmarillion”. 12. I read very often. 13. I like fantasy, science fiction, tales, poems, classics and books about life. 14. Now I read a book “Angel’s tract”. 15. This book is very interesting. 16. I have an electronic book, it is very convenient. 17. Reading is very good. 18. Reading gives much pleasure 19. Books at home are a wonderful source of knowledge and pleasure. 20. My hobby is very interesting and useful.

1. My family lives in a big and comfortable house. 2. There are six rooms in the house. 3. There are two bedrooms, a living-room, a kitchen, a bath-room and a hall in it. 4. My room is on the second floor. 5. It is clear and cosy. 6. There is one window in my room. 7. There is a table in the corner of the room. 8. On the right there is a sofa and chest of drawers. 9. There are some shelves with books in the room. 10. There is a carpet in the middle of my room. 11 I like my room very much. 12. My room is a nice place for both rest and work. 13. Our kitchen is not very large but it is light. 14. In the evenings we like to have tea and have rest there. 15. The largest room in my house is the living-room. 16. There is a sofa, two armchairs, a coffee table, a TV in it. 17. There is big verandah and two store-rooms in my house. 18. My house is in the garden. 19. Our garden is very beautiful. 20. We like our house.

1. My name is Svetlana. 2. My surname is Kolova. 3. I am nineteen years old. 4. My family is not big. 5. I have got a mother, a father, a sister and a grandmother. 6. My mother’s name is Elena. 7. She is a librarian. She likes her profession. 8. Mother likes flowers and cookery. 9. My father’s name is Alexander. 10. He is a driver. 11. My sister’s name is Ekaterina. 12. She is a schoolgirl. 13. She likes reading books and drawing. 14. My grandmother is a pensioner (лучше is retired). 15. Earlier she worked as a doctor. 16. My family lives in a big and comfortable house. 17. We have a dog, two cats. 18. Pets are nice and playful. 19. Our family is friendly. 20. We love each other.

1. Viggo Peter Mortensen is an American actor, poet, musician, photographer and painter. He is a very handsome man. 2. He was born in New York City in 1958 year. 3. His mother, Grace, was American. 4. His father, Viggo Peter Mortensen, was Danish. 5. The family moved to Venezuela, then Denmark, and eventually lived in Argentina. 6. With his mother he returned to New York, when Viggo was eleven year. 7. Viggo began studying in Watertown High School and became a very good student and athlete. 8. He graduated in 1976 and went on to St. Lawrence University in Canton, New York. 9. He made his film debut in 1985 year. 10. He got married in 1987. 11. Viggo is a very talented actor. 12. He played many parts. 13. The Indian Runner, Carlito's Way, Crimson Tide, The Portrait of a Lady, G.I. Jane and A Walk on the Moon are famous films, where Viggo played the leading part. 14. But his most famous film is “Lord of the rings”. 15. He played Aragorn in this film. 16. “Lord of the rings” is a very interesting film. 17. I watch it very often. 18. I like Viggo, because he is talented!

1. On Saturday I passed an examination. (Mathematical statistics) 2. I received “five”. 3.My sister and I went to grandmother. 4. We drank coffee and watched TV. 5. In the evening we watched a cartoon “Lilo and Stitch”. 6. The Cartoon was very interesting and nice. 7. I watched a football match at night. 8. Spain defeated France. The Match was very interesting and beautiful. 9. The Match finished late and I went to bed. 10. I slept very long. 11. On Sunday I went on a lake with my family. 12. I swam and played volley-boll. 13. I read a book about a witch and a wizard. 14. the Book was fascinating. 15. In the evening my sister and I wrote a text for an examination. 16. Then I learnt the text. 17. I cooked a cake. 18. The Cake was tasty. 19. At night I watched a football match again. 20. This week-end was very good.

[Emma-tyan]

повторите правила артиклей, очень плохо с артиклями

[Ancalina]

Alensya, Emma-tyan, спасибо вам огромное! У меня не только с артиклями у меня со всем плохо.. правила я вроде бы знаю, а применять не умею.

[эйзенхерц]

Девочка_из_снов,
я побуду мимокрокодилом, но у вас присутствует проблема порядка слов в предложении, и у первого комментатора текст более грамотен в этом плане, хотя с артиклями правильнее второй вариант (если закрыть глаза на остальную грамматику)