[Shuga_Shuga]

Здравствуйте,пожалуйста окажите помощь )
проверьте на ошибки диалог

-Hi, my friend, how are you?
-hi, everything is very bad
-what happened?
-I want to learn English, but I do not know how
-you know, and I want to learn English.I know how to help you! we can go abroad and learn a language
-Oooh ... it's too expensive
-then let's buy a "teach youself" pack with a book and CDs
-Oh, it's a good idea!
-we can also finding a private teacher to teach us both twice a week
-As well, that I met you! When we begin? I can not wait to learn
-right now. to start going to the store and buy the book
-let's go

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[maybe its me]

диалог как будто через кальку переведен.
что больше всего бросилось в глаза:

you know, I want to learn English too

we can go abroad and learn the language there

we can also find a private teacher to teach us both twice a week

How nice that I've met you! When will we start? I can not wait to learn

-right now. In order to start you have to go to the store and buy the book

[Shuga_Shuga]

спасибо огромное