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University life for me
The merry-go-round of University life is something that one never forgets. It is a fascinating, fantastic, fabulous experience.
It’s a hundred percent true. Who can forget the day when he turns from an applicant who has passed entrance exams into a first-year student? That’s great!
Everyone tries hard to be, or at least to look, diligent, smart and enthusiastic. First tests and examination session. The first successes and first failures. Can you forget that? I can’t.
I am a 5-year part-time student now and I’m not so diligent, not so smart and not so enthusiastic as when I was a first-year student. Studying at University has changed people and it’s changed me.
It is a fabulous experience with great parties and meeting different kind of people but also it is a hard work: lectures, seminars and tutorials, a real avalanche of homework, assignments, written reproductions, compositions, synopses and papers. Works handed in and handed out. It’s a very hard and difficult work, don’t you think so?
I’m study at faculty of philology. Special disciplines so as history of Russian and foreign literature, psychology, ancient languages, Russian language and other give students knowledge on different problems.
So I think the studying at the university is a great step to a grown life. Having ended the university and becoming highly skilled experts we shall define the future of the native land, the our future and the future of the children and in a new 21 century on which revival of our country is necessary, blossoming of our faces, our abilities, our talent.