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Доброго времени суток!
Задали написать небольшую историю. Тема бред, но вот, что получилось..(
End of the world

From that day on he was never the same again...
It was December 21, 2012. The morning started out like any other peaceful winter morning. He grew up in Boston; his whole family lived there for years. He wasn't like most of the people who believed that the world will end. He did not believe until it started.
And it all started when the earth began to tremble. Everyone went outside to see what was happen. Then the ground cracked and flames burst from the broken crust. Fire rained down on the city. It was a scene of mass destruction. The people were screaming, the children crying, and the animals raced in fear. The buildings turned to ashes.
He was with the rest of the town hiding in a bomb shelter underground. Lots of people think the world is gonna end today. His thoughts were mixed. He was so scared more than never before. He understood that the shelter will not save him from this disaster.
Shock. Panic. Crush. People were dying in front of him. He replayed in his head these things and he wanted only one that all this was a lie.
?? Suddenly the sound of a shrill and sudden flash of light made him blink/ has forced it to go blind(?), and he has felt that something has fallen off on him. He has shouted from a pain.. And.. Has woken up at home in bed.. And.. It was a dream, just a dream.
Of course it was just his imagination, but since then, he began to appreciate every moment of his live.


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Особенно последние абзацы..согласовка времён - не моё...((

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